A mighty moment rules all,
In the same way I am a tree.
I feel the bite of the wind,
Listen to the howling of my mind
And taste the sweetness of the sap.
The scent of my morning glory is divine
And I watch the upward journey of the vines.
And yet, the sound of colors surrounds me,
Causing the dissolution of my sight.
I call out to God
And wonder why I’ve lost the way Home.
I am no longer a tree, but a coffin,
Built for nothing more than to rot.
Yet the growth of flowers surrounds me.
My life seems to be nothing but a metaphor
Which shows that surviving is hopelessly sought
By those who would despair of your garden
Seeing that nothing will ever change if it is attempted.
Because life is more than just saying
The moving tree of intangibility.
The sunset’s gaze shows me how I should proceed.
The tree within me takes flight,
The roots of it trailing behind as a bridal veil.
Mattie continues her walk through the mirrored hall,
Knowing that soon the pictures will be clear in meaning
The mirror will no longer be blinding.
Soon I shall find the end of the Mirrored House
And know what it is to be the flying tree.
“Оставьте и я буду плакать,”
Says the Earth below as she reaches out for me.
I continue to glide away
Not knowing of what comes my way.
Because the tree, with roots like a bridal veil
Continues it’s flight throughout the sky above,
Knowing that it will someday find it’s Home.
Whew! That was hard, but totally worth it!
NaPoWriMo prompt: http://www.napowrimo.net/2014/04/day-29/
very cohesive! I’m still struggling with it.
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It took me a good hour and a half to write this. Any cohesion is mostly accidental.
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I’m working on mine now, and not liking it.
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Keep going!
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thanks for the encouragement Martha! I finished. Whew. http://angieinspired.wordpress.com/2014/04/29/when-i-read-homer/
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I’m heading on over to check it out!
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I couldn’t possibly say whether it fits the prompt or not, but it is a really, really good poem regardless! Great job!!! *smile*
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Thank you! There are a couple moments where I stretch the prompt.
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This reads well, and the prompt contradictions have been smoothly handled.
My biggest problem came with avoiding a statement at the end. Stating anything without one is hard!
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Thank you. I had a problem figuring out a metaphor to begin at first. I just stared at it with a blank mind there for a bit.
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Mine was pretty blank througout!
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Blank minds like to haunt people, don’t they?
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Great peace, nice flow… what does “Оставьте и я буду плакать,” mean??
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(…just out of curiosity!)
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Leave and I will cry. I read somewhere that this is what ‘I love you’ roughly translates to.
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That’s really quite beautiful!
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I thought so as well.
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You really tackled this prompt quite well! 🙂 Nice.
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Thank you, I like to take challenges every now and then that make me reach. Unless it’s a lazy day.
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You’re welcome. Me too. I like to push myself. 🙂
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And if it’s off a cliff in writing, then you learn to fly or fall with style.
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